What i think so far. Its good but if it is going to be 'Thrilling' then we need to flash to pictures or VERY short clips throughout the co-op scene and they could be of
Blood in a sink ?
Someone cleaning blood ?
Credits ?- if we could it'd be good to do them in a bloody font on photoshop first and just place them as stills rather than a title page, ill look into that on my PC
Bloody clothes ?
Matt Bentley dead ?
Alcohol ?
Drugs ?
Murder Weapon ?
Killer ?
Blood- Anything red ?
Anything that gives a bit away about the story line. Because at the moment, did you guess what's going on or is it just the same; drugs; alcohol and murder that every year 12 does ? So therefore flashing a weapon and/or a person would at least hint a possible story line ? :)
OH and, have you got any ideas of something special we could put in it to make it stand out ? like i know its a bit farfetched but having someone fall off a roof, just push the boat out to something no year 12 has done before!
Any more feedback ?
Also look through itunes at the streets songs, some of them could be sued for it and some of the dramatic 50 cent ones.
Leave me a 'stickie' to tell me what you have done and what you would like me to do when i get this back if i do!,
*feedback written by james perry
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